4 Word Story
- Thread starter DodoSerebro
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she can´t decide, whom she loves more, Archibald or the horus priest.
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We should sum up:
A family in a kingdom won money in a lottery and became famous. They had to beware of false friends. Archibald was one of them. He aimed to steal their money. His jealous wife followed him around everywhere (we forgot about her in the whole story). This wife is NOT Trisha. Trisha is the girl next door, that Archibald fell in love with. Trisha wants the money from Archibald, although he isn´t in possession of it. The money still belongs to the family once upon a time in a kingdom. Archibald hasn´t stolen it, yet (we never mentioned anything like that). Trisha is under the spell of a horus priest with a secret. His soul seems to be bound to a wolf. But Trisha didn´t really find out. Although she is in love with the horus priest and under a spell of his, she is in love with Archibald as well. But she still must steel the money from him - as soon as he has stolen it from the anonymous familiy, with unknown family members.
I very much doubt, we´ll win the Nobel or the Pulitzer prize for this
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We should sum up:
A family in a kingdom won money in a lottery and became famous. They had to beware of false friends. Archibald was one of them. He aimed to steal their money. His jealous wife followed him around everywhere (we forgot about her in the whole story). This wife is NOT Trisha. Trisha is the girl next door, that Archibald fell in love with. Trisha wants the money from Archibald, although he isn´t in possession of it. The money still belongs to the family once upon a time in a kingdom. Archibald hasn´t stolen it, yet (we never mentioned anything like that). Trisha is under the spell of a horus priest with a secret. His soul seems to be bound to a wolf. But Trisha didn´t really find out. Although she is in love with the horus priest and under a spell of his, she is in love with Archibald as well. But she still must steel the money from him - as soon as he has stolen it from the anonymous familiy, with unknown family members.
I very much doubt, we´ll win the Nobel or the Pulitzer prize for this
.Believe it or not, but - our story really IS this confusing:
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Once Upon a Time / in a small Kingdom... / with a peaceful life / lived a big family / expecting a good future /
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then one day, there / someone won the lottery, / that changed their life / They became very famous / with lots of money /
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but there was still / an unhappy thought about.. / the new friends that / took advantage of them /
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,Archibald was his name / his purpose was to / get all the money / he could carry away /
****Remark: from the rich family<<
with so much greedy /
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,but yet he was / a good decent man / 35 years old and / a very beautiful wife / who followed him everywhere / because she is suspicious / that he might be / in love with another / woman lives next door /
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Trisha is her name /
****Remark: name of the woman, (who) lives next door. It MUST be this way - he wouldn´t ask his wife, to meet him in the park, later on in our story, if he could talk to her at home, as well.<<
Archibald's crazy about her /
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. The lottery money won / could easily get lost / He must be careful / that she wont find /
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.Archibald wanted that money / to buy big house / but didn't know how /
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he needed some advice / so he went to / his lawyer and asked / for the best way... / to get best deal /to hide the money / from avaricious house vendors /
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,but the money wasn't / kept secret long enough / so now everybody knew / something must be done /
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so Archibald asked.. / Trisha to meet him / somewhere in the park / to give him advice /
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but Trisha didn't answer / Something must be wrong / might have back pain / or love someone else / or any unknown reason /
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Archibald is very curious / she's with someone else? /
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Yes,she is with / an egyptian horus priest / that she fantasized about /
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Oh!God how handsome / she thought, he ****Remark: he ,the horus priest,<< were / so perfect for her / to carry her around / like a London Cabbie / plus so romantically feeling / she must hide ****Remark: him<< from Archibald /
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that made her unhappy /
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Archibald has a premonition / And asks her to... / meet him at coffee shop /
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Trisha is thinkin' of / nothing. She was hypnotized
****Remark: by the horus priest<<
so confusing about herself /
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She wanted that money / for herself and lover ****Remark: The horus priest<</
they could travel together / and goto Antananarivo(Madagascar) /
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Not knowing the priest´s secret / she lighted a candle /
****Remark: Where is she, when she lights the candle? She must be still at (her?) home, because „they COULD travel together“. Obviously Trisha did not meet Archibald at the coffee shop, although he asked her.<<
and saw something hidden / with big glowing eyes / thinking finally found it /
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the hidden place of / Pangoblis in the heart / of the sorcerers soul / bound in a monstrous, gnarling wolf /
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But Trisha couldn't stand / the mystery of what happened /
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She still loved Archibald / she can´t decide, whom she loves more, Archibald or the horus priest.
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Once Upon a Time / in a small Kingdom... / with a peaceful life / lived a big family / expecting a good future /
-----
then one day, there / someone won the lottery, / that changed their life / They became very famous / with lots of money /
---
but there was still / an unhappy thought about.. / the new friends that / took advantage of them /
-----
,Archibald was his name / his purpose was to / get all the money / he could carry away /
****Remark: from the rich family<<
with so much greedy /
-----
,but yet he was / a good decent man / 35 years old and / a very beautiful wife / who followed him everywhere / because she is suspicious / that he might be / in love with another / woman lives next door /
-----
Trisha is her name /
****Remark: name of the woman, (who) lives next door. It MUST be this way - he wouldn´t ask his wife, to meet him in the park, later on in our story, if he could talk to her at home, as well.<<
Archibald's crazy about her /
-----
. The lottery money won / could easily get lost / He must be careful / that she wont find /
---
.Archibald wanted that money / to buy big house / but didn't know how /
-----
he needed some advice / so he went to / his lawyer and asked / for the best way... / to get best deal /to hide the money / from avaricious house vendors /
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,but the money wasn't / kept secret long enough / so now everybody knew / something must be done /
-----
so Archibald asked.. / Trisha to meet him / somewhere in the park / to give him advice /
-----
but Trisha didn't answer / Something must be wrong / might have back pain / or love someone else / or any unknown reason /
---
Archibald is very curious / she's with someone else? /
-----
Yes,she is with / an egyptian horus priest / that she fantasized about /
-----
Oh!God how handsome / she thought, he ****Remark: he ,the horus priest,<< were / so perfect for her / to carry her around / like a London Cabbie / plus so romantically feeling / she must hide ****Remark: him<< from Archibald /
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that made her unhappy /
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Archibald has a premonition / And asks her to... / meet him at coffee shop /
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Trisha is thinkin' of / nothing. She was hypnotized
****Remark: by the horus priest<<
so confusing about herself /
-----
She wanted that money / for herself and lover ****Remark: The horus priest<</
they could travel together / and goto Antananarivo(Madagascar) /
-----
Not knowing the priest´s secret / she lighted a candle /
****Remark: Where is she, when she lights the candle? She must be still at (her?) home, because „they COULD travel together“. Obviously Trisha did not meet Archibald at the coffee shop, although he asked her.<<
and saw something hidden / with big glowing eyes / thinking finally found it /
-----
the hidden place of / Pangoblis in the heart / of the sorcerers soul / bound in a monstrous, gnarling wolf /
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But Trisha couldn't stand / the mystery of what happened /
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She still loved Archibald / she can´t decide, whom she loves more, Archibald or the horus priest.
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